At the start of the year, I received an email from Black Library saying that they were now accepting submissions for stories. The theme was to be Deathwatch, and there was a very strict 500 word limit, so I got to work. I'd not really done any serious creative writing before, just some narrative battle reports and shit, so it was certainly a challenge. Here's the blurb I came up with to whet your appetite.
When a mysterious Inquisitor enlists an Ultramarine who had fought at Damnos, and a Minotaur survivor of the Orpheus Sector, into the Deathwatch with a mission to investigate a potential tomb world, frictions arise between the pair over the theoretical and practicals of facing the living metal of the Necrons.
Needless to say I haven't heard back from them, I assume that my advance cheque got lost in the post, so I think I'm safe to be able to publish my submission now so here we go! Please let me know what you think, it's quite removed from bolter porn the usually put out.
Bronze, Silver, and
Gold
As Gladius boarded the
Thunderhawk that would be his carriage to the warship waiting in
orbit his thoughts drifted. Why had he been selected by the Ordos
Xenos? Had someone put him forward for this mission, possibly the
High Suzerain of Ultramar?
He had stood beside
Sicarius during the first fateful battle on Damnos, one of a handful
of survivors from the struggle against the Necrons, then returned
alongside hundreds of his brothers when Marneus Calgar had declared a
return to the planet to rid it of the ancient beings. Perhaps it was
due to this experience that he was chosen, having survived two
cataclysmic battles with the same foe. Could that be why he had been
chosen?
Would he ever rejoin
his squad? He knew that such thoughts were unnecessary, that it was a
great honour and his duty, but Gladius had always imagined his
glorious bloodied death to occur surrounded by his battle brothers,
marines he had spent countless hours with upon the field of battle.
From what had been
relayed to him, he was to be the third member of the killteam
assembled by the Inquisitor. Recalling his career, Gladius could
think of very few encounters with such characters previously, and the
tales woven by his comrades ranged wildly from the extreme to the
mysterious. He felt the tug of deceleration as the transport began
it's landing in the vast hangar bay of the waiting ship. He was not
aware of the fact but Gladius was the last of the Inquisitors' puzzle
pieces to step aboard the sombre vessel.
The was no welcome
party as he disembarked from the Thunderhawk, the only sounds being
the creaking of it's metal skin as it cooled in the atmosphere, and
Servitors whirring and clicking about their business. After some
minutes a door slid apart and a wiry biped ambled towards him. From a
distance he appeared to be just another Servitor, but as he
approached, Gladius could see that he was an augmented human, part of
the Inquisitors retinue no doubt. No words were spoken, but Gladius
knew that he was supposed to follow the strange creature.
After unloading his
meagre belongings in his sparse chamber, he set out to find the other
marines selected for the mission. There were no signs of life aboard,
so he followed his instinct and the faint sounds echoing along the
corridors. Striding along the metal decking he noted the absence of
any other movement around him.
The sounds grew louder
and as he rounded a corner he was greeted by a towering arch, through
which a great light streamed. He recognised the familiar noise of
someone duelling with a battle automata. As his unhelmeted eyes
adjusted to the contrast between the dark corridor and the bright
practice chamber he saw a lone warrior, twisting and turning around
the apparatus with skill and ease. The figure was in his battle
plate, a burnished bronze, with red accents. Gladius knew the chapter
immediately, the Minotaurs.
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ReplyDeleteLooking forward to the hardback :)
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